Writing

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== We wrote a solider letter based from the movie we watched (Gallipoli). We started off with a printed plan that the teachers gave us. Everyone sat on the floor and worked together so everybody’s plan would make sense. In my story I am a nurse writing in my sleep shift. I found this activity very interesting. Here it is: ==

== We also wrote a Portal story, this was a test. We started from scratch and made our own plan, we sat in silence as we did this. Everybody was to write a story that had a portal included in it. We wrote our story on our netbooks then printed it out unedited. Next we edited the one we just printed, then we went back to our netbooks and made the story the same as the one we printed. We attached the 3 sheets with a staple then handed it in to our class teacher: ==

[[file:Portal story KELSEY.docx]]
== We wrote a formal letter to a company as well. People could choose if they wanted it to be a positive or a negative story. I chose to write to the Bates Saddlery in Perth. My letter was positive. I was complementing on how well they have made the new Wintec 2000’s and some of the great ideas they have put into the wonderful saddle. Here it is: == == With all this writing, on my netbook and in my writing book I think that my writing/typing has improved heaps. I am also writing WAY better story’s with WAY more information than last year in grade 5. I think that the grade six teachers do a fantastic job at educating all of us students. ==

== This year we have lerned a new way to plan. First we start off with an intro.The intro consists of the opening part of the story, the part that will make the reader want to read on. Ifound hatI have to make the intro interesting so tht people will want to keep reading my piece of writing. Next we move on to the middle we have 3 main paragraphs with braches of information off each main paragraph. ==

I have recently set myself a new goal with my writng! It is to make my writing longer, but not to babble on and on.
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